Catching the signal from one of her friends, Angela brushed her skirt, took a deep breath and walked towards where he was sitting. She knew what was going to happen, and she knew how she felt. While walking towards him, she remembered when she was walking towards him to ask him the same thing she had been holding on for a long time. She look up and saw the birds gliding as floating balloons in the air. Angela’s eyes were diamonds everyone liked them. Afterwards, she stared down because she didn’t want to look at him she saw ants coming out of the stone path; they were as small as bacteria. She stepped on a small piece of sharpened trash, it hurted enough to shout. She kept it in to keep her cool. The frequency of the scream trying to break out of her mouth. She noticed that she was only steps away from the guy. She knew it was time to look up. She moved her head slowly upwards. Only 3 more steps. She saw his face; she looked right in his purple, pink, neon green eyes. Words started coming out of her mouth “I, I, I,…..I,” Angela murmured
“You what,” he said
“I want to battle you in tecktonik,”
“You what,” he said
“I want to battle you in tecktonik,”
nice going luis
ReplyDeletei like how you put alot of details in the story about when she was walking and what she was steping on and seeing
jAjAjA i LiKE THE WAy yOU MAdE THE STORy AbOUT WHAT yOU LiKE ANd HOW yOU dESCRiBEd HOW SHE fELT..:)
ReplyDeleteGood job describing how she was feeling.You put a lot of detail into this & i liked it :)
ReplyDeleteomg shorty your so obssessed with tecktonik!!! lol i like how you describe how she felt and that her eyes turn like diamonds. =]
ReplyDeleteI liked the way that you were describing everything around her. I also liked the way that you should the way she was feeling and in the end you just said "I challenge you to tecktonik". this story was really cool
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